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Apollo 11 - The First Moon Walk | Things You Wanna Know

Full of great facts about the moon landing - watch this before writing today's paragraph. Try to use lots of facts in your own work too!

Today, I would like you to write the next paragraph of your newspaper report about the moon landing. This will be part of the main body of your text. Today's paragraph will be all about how the astronauts travelled to space. Join me on Zoom where we will do some shared writing together. Use your own notes from last week to help you. I've included my notes below to give you some ideas to: 

I would like to see you using parenthesis in your writing today. This includes using commas, brackets and dashes to give additional information. We will look at how to do this during our Zoom lesson. There is a help sheet below to give you some example sentences if you need it.